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Review: THE PECULIAR, by Stefan Bachmann

22 Jul

THE PECULIAR

by Stefan Bachmann

Why I Read It

It will come as no surprise to most of you that I got my copy of The Peculiar in the form of a BEA ARC. Once again, I knew little to nothing about it, apart from the minimal info on the back cover and the fact that it had a clockwork bird on the front. But it was blurbed by Rick Riordan, and I’d heard the words “steampunk/fantasy/gothic horror” attached to it.

Um, yes please?

How I Read It

After I’d finished Game of Thrones, The Peculiar became my next subway commute book. I even took it on an EXPEDITION one evening when I decided to go in search of adventure (and delicious food) in Manhattan. I also nearly missed my stop a couple of times while reading it (the “nearly” part is just because I’m a subway-stop-detecting ninja, not because it wasn’t utterly engrossing).

What Is It About?

I’m discovering more and more that I’m not a fan of jacket copy. Maybe it’s the result of reading so many query letters. Maybe it’s the fact that I wrote a 20-page research paper on jacket copy last semester. Maybe it’s just the knowledge that jacket copy so rarely does justice to the book itself. Whatever the case, you are of course welcome to check out the jacket copy for The Peculiar on Amazon, but I’m going to stick with doing a bundle of keywords and themes, in no particular order:

Alternate history, steampunky Victorian England, clockwork devices, faeries (of the pointy, strange, self-interested variety), costly and catastrophically destructive magic, Bath (as in the town in England), the theft of children, clash of magic and technology, the English Parliament, racial tensions, unlikely alliances, and gothic horror.

What I Thought of It

Guys, I loved reading this. It’s like Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell meets Coraline meets The Golden Compass, and since I adore all of those books, it shouldn’t come as a surprise that right from the beginning of The Peculiar, I was hooked. It’s middle grade fiction (i.e. intended for readers in the 9-12 age bracket), but if MG isn’t your usual gig, don’t let that put you off; it’s definitely enjoyable for more sophisticated readers too. In true Neil-Gaiman-esque fashion, the atmosphere throughout was deliciously creepy, and the horror elements were surprisingly…well, horrifying. As the mysteries and plot unfolded, I had a couple of moments where I was actually so shocked that I gasped out loud (I’m not normally a vocal reader). I also became particularly fond of the character of Arthur Jelliby—a young, determinedly nice politician with no real political ambition whose desire to lead a calm and tidy life is exactly what leads him into trouble. And the ending! The ending. Gah. No spoilers, but…come on. It’s horror. Something I’ve had drilled into me as a writer is that the best kind of endings are the ones that are both surprising and inevitable, and I think Bachmann nailed that. And I hear there’s a sequel in the works…

Where You Can Get It

The official release date for The Peculiar is September 18, 2012 (which is, coincidentally, the same day The Raven Boys will be released). HOWEVER, if you want a shot at winning your very own ARC before the release date, there’s a giveaway on The Peculiar‘s Goodreads page. The window is open until August 6th, so go and enter! You should also feel free to preorder it from Amazon or (preferably) from your local independent bookseller. Also, if you’re on Twitter, you should all go follow @Stefan_Bachmann. He’s genuinely nice and humble and great fun to chat with!

Summary Haiku

Otherworldly fae

Trying to live with humans:

This cannot end well.

Blogiversary ARC Giveaway — The Winners!

17 Jul

Picture courtesy of xkcd.com

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After long hours of waiting, I finally get to announce the winners of the three BEA ARCs!

I wish I had some awesome story about how it was SO HARD to choose between your entries, but the truth is that Random.org did the deed for me. Oh, I definitely sat there for about five minutes straight, checking and re-checking to make sure everyone had the correct number of entries. I also found myself surprisingly sad about it, because I wish I could give you ALL books. You’re ALL awesome, and making people happy is literally one of my favorite things in the world, and giving people presents is awesome. The whole point of this blogiversary fest is so I can give back to you guys.

But in the end, it comes down to picking three names out of nearly 80 entries, and I want to be fair about it.

SO, without further ado, the winners are… (DRUMROLL AND WAVY SCROLL-DOWN-ARROWS, PLEASE):

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MARK O’BRIEN, JESS MOORE*, and OLIVIA! :D

Best of all, you each get your first pick (that worked out nicely)! Mark will be getting ORIGIN, Jess will get THE ELEPHANT KEEPERS’ CHILDREN, and Olivia will get BREATHE (it’s a signed copy, BTW!).

Winners, please email me at ari.susumago (at) gmail.com with a mailing address I can send your book to! And if you didn’t win this time, do not despair! If my bank account permits, I hope to do another one of these giveaways later in the summer (because guys, seriously, I have so many ARCs). Also, those of you with Goodreads accounts should keep an eye on them: sometimes publishers offer ARC giveaways through GR. So if you haven’t already done so, be sure to add these books to your to-read lists so they’re on your radar.

Finally, keep your eyes peeled for Sunday’s post: I’ll be reviewing my ARC of THE PECULIAR, by Stefan Bachmann. It’s so cool, you guys. Seriously. Steampunk + horror + faeries = awesome. :D

*And speaking of Goodreads giveaways, there’s one going on right now for ARCs of THE PECULIAR—click here and scroll down to enter!*

In the meantime, thank you so much for your support over the past year and for your wonderful blogiversary wishes! We couldn’t have done it without you. :)

Much love,
Ari (and Fred)

* Just to be clear in case anyone is checking: Jess M. put her entry on the Blogiversary Eve “reminder” post instead of the main contest post.

BLOGIVERSARY, ALL CAPS, & BEA ARC GIVEAWAYS!

12 Jul

DEAR READERS AND RAPTORS, I AM WRITING TO YOU IN ALL CAPS.

Yes, we can see that, Ari. But why?

BECAUSE I AM SO EXCITED TO ANNOUNCE THAT THE ONE-YEAR BLOGIVERSARY FOR A FUZZY MANGO WITH WINGS WILL BE ON MONDAY, JULY 16TH, 2012. A whole year, you guys!

You get the idea. :D

To celebrate, Fred and I have decided to give away some of the awesome ARCs we got at BEA. We’d love to hang on to them, of course, but since we literally don’t have time to read the 50+ books we’ve acquired since arriving in NY, we’re looking forward to finding good homes for a few of them! ARCs are designed to generate publicity/excitement for upcoming books, after all, so we’re doing those authors a disservice if we just sit on them until we have time to read them.

And which ARCs are going up for adoption? I’ve selected a variety of galleys for you to choose from. Three are adult fiction. Six are YA. Five are MG. The genres range from contemporary to historical to dystopian to paranormal to fantasy to science fiction. If you want to find out what the book is about, click on the image of the cover to be linked straight to the book’s Amazon page. Rather than put the jacket copy here on the blog, I’ve opted to post the opening lines from each ARC—of course, these are subject to change because most of these books aren’t published yet, but I think it’s always nice to get a flavor of the writing. (Any typos/mistakes are mine.)

Without further ado, here we go!

 

ADULT FICTION

 

1. THE ELEPHANT KEEPER’S CHILDREN, by Peter Høeg

Opening lines:

I have found a door out of the prison. It opens out onto freedom. I am writing this to show you that door. You might ask how much freedom he thinks he’s entitled to, this boy who was born on Finø, the island they call Denmark’s Gran Canaria, and in the rectory to boot, with its twelve rooms and a garden as big as a park, and not only that but born into the midst of a father and mother, and older sister and older brother, and grandparents and a great-grandmother, and a dog, all of which sounds like an advert for something expensive but a worthwhile investment for all the family.

 

2. THE YELLOW BIRDS, by Kevin Powers

Opening lines:

The war tried to kill us in the spring. As grass greened the plains of Nineveh and the weather warmed, we patrolled the low-slung hills beyond the cities and towns. We moved over them and through the tall grass on faith, kneading paths into the windswept growth like pioneers. While we slept, the war rubbed its thousand ribs against the ground in prayer. When we pressed onward through exhaustion, its eyes were white and open in the dark. While we ate, the war fasted, fed by its own deprivation. It made love and gave birth and spread through fire.

 

3. SOUL THIEF, by Alison Lorimer

Opening lines:

I wish I could convince myself this was a dream. The pain is too much.
The air is hot, sour and almost impossible to breathe. It feel thick and acidic against my tongue, like a gag over my lips. It’s only been hours—I think—since they slammed the iron door over the cave-like hole. Sealed in, I fade into the pitch black of my mind and then come back to life again.
Conscious
Unconscious.
Pain.
It feels like a tomb.

 

YOUNG ADULT FICTION

 

1. MAGISTERIUM, by Jeff Hirsch

Opening lines:

Glenn followed the hum of machinery out to the edge of the forest.

“Dad! Dinner”

Balancing a tray in her hands, and her tablet under one arm, Glenn eased around a patch of snow stained blue from the lights of the generator that powered her father’s workshop.

Workshop was a grand term for what Dad had built in the back corner of their yard. Glenn had tried to tell him he should fab it—they had the money when he first built it. He said you couldn’t let machines do everything for you; sometimes you had to use your own two hands. Of course, what his own two hands got him was a leaky roof and walls that twisted to one side as if they were caught in a perpetual hurricane.

 

2. A SOLDIER’S SECRET, by Marissa Moss

Opening lines:

“Just a minute there.” The recruiter stops me as I lean over to dip the pen in ink. “You can’t enlist.”

I freeze. Can he tell? I’m wearing a shirt, vest, and trousers as usual, my curly hair cut short except for a lock that insists on falling over my forehead. I brush it away nervously to meet the man’s eyes. I’ve been passing for nearly three years now, but every new encounter still brings with it the same fear. I take nothing for granted. The key thing, I remind myself, is not to reveal anything, to act as normal as possible.

“I beg your pardon,” I say as if I haven’t heard him clearly. I keep my voice calm and low, pushing down the panic that’s bubbling up inside of me.

 

3. ORIGIN, by Jessica Khoury

Opening lines:

I’m told that the day I was born, Uncle Paolo held me against his white lab coat and whispered, “She is perfect.” Sixteen years later, they’re still repeating the word. Every day I hear it, from the scientists of the guards, from my mother or from my Aunt Brigid. Perfect.

They say other things too. That there are no others like me, at least not yet. That I am the pinnacle of mankind, a goddess born of mortal flesh. You are immortal, Pia, and you are perfect, they say.

 

4. BEAUTIFUL LIES, by Jessica Warman

Opening lines:

It’s one of those cool, crisp fall nights that make you feel like the air is ripe with possibility, like anything could happen. From where we stand on the jogging trail, my sister and I can see the whole city stretching out around us. On the farthest end, all the way across town, there is a dusk-lit celebration taking place, a huge tent holding overlapping threads of bodies, the sounds of their voices carrying across the wind, all the way to us.

“Ah. Oktoberfest at the Yellow Moon,” she says to me, squinting, standing on tiptoes in her scuffed ballet flats, like if she stares at the party long enough she might absorb some of the excitement, which feels almost electric as it seeps from the crowd.

 

5. FALLING KINGDOMS, by Morgan Rhodes

Opening lines:

She’d never killed before tonight.

“Stay back,” her sister hissed.

Jana pressed against the stone wall of the villa. She searched the shadows that surrounded them, briefly looking up at the stars bright as diamonds against the black sky.

Squeezing her eyes shut, she prayed to the ancient sorceress. Please, Eva, give me the magic I need to find her.

When she opened her eyes, fear shot through her. On the branch of a tree a dozen paces away sat a golden hawk.

“They’re watching us,” she whispered. “They know what we’ve done.”

Sabina flicked a glance at the hawk. “We need to move. Now. There’s no time to waste.”

 

6. BREATHE, by Sarah Crossan

Opening lines:

Breathing is a right, not a privilege, so I’m stealing it back. I’m nervous, but I’m not scared. This is the mission I’ve been training for. I’m ready to lead.

I squeeze Abel’s hand and he looks at me. “Now?” he asks. He puts his other hand into his pocket.

“No, no. Not yet,” I whisper. Several cameras are trained right at us and there’s a steward only meters away. I pull Abel close and nuzzle his neck. We aren’t a couple, but posing as one makes us less conspicuous.

“So tell me when,” Abel says.

 

MIDDLE GRADE FICTION

 

1. CAPTAIN UNDERPANTS AND THE TERRIFYING RETURN OF TIPPY TINKLETROUSERS, by Dav Pilkey

Opening lines:

This is George Beard and Harold Hutchins. George is the kid on the right with the tie and the flat-top. Harold is the one on the left with the T-shirt and the bad haircut. Remember that now.

When our last adventure ended, George and Harold were being escorted to jail. The police had discovered surveillance photos showing the two boys robbing a bank with Captain Underpants. Of course, we all know that Geroge, Harold, and Captain Underpants were innocent. It was their evil twins who had robbed that bank. But the police hadn’t bothered to read the last book, so they really didn’t know what was going on.

 

2. SHADOW ON THE MOUNTAIN, by Margi Preus

Opening lines:

Against the blue-black mountains, Espen’s bicycle was just a tiny moving speck. Far below the road, the river pulsed and rushed, swollen with rain and snowmelt. The sun had long ago slipped away, leaving just a thin fringe of light glimmering along the ragged edge of the western mountains. The dangerous time of day, his grandmother would have said, the time of day the trolls come out.

 

 

 

3. GODS AND WARRIORS, by Michelle Paver

Opening lines:

The shaft of the arrow was black and fletched with crow feathers, but Hylas couldn’t see the head because it was buried in his arm.

Clutching it to stop it wobbling, he scrambled down the slope. No time to pull it out. The black warriors could be anywhere.

He was ragingly thirsty and so tired he couldn’t think straight. The Sun beat down on him and the thorn scrub gave no cover; he felt horribly exposed. But even worse was the worry over Issi, and the aching disbelief about Scram.

 

4. FLYING THE DRAGON, by Natalie Dias Lorenzi

Opening lines:

Skye had known something was coming. The way her dad had been acting lately was beyond his normal weirdness. She just never guessed the something coming would be a bunch of Japanese relatives she’d never met.

The first sign of trouble was when her dad switched from silverware to chopsticks. Maybe she shouldn’t have been surprised. After all, her dad was Japanese. Sort of. He’d been born and raised in Japan but hadn’t been back since he married her mom. To Skye he was pretty much American. And since Virginia is about as far away from Japan as you can get, Skye didn’t blame herself for forgetting that she was half Japanese herself.

 

5. STEALING AIR, by Trent Reedy

Opening lines: 

“Great success through great risk,” Brian whispered as he jumped his skateboard off the curb. There were over half a dozen kids carving tricks at the skate pack just ahead of him. Brian didn’t know any of them, but since tomorrow would be his first day at a new school, he might as well do something to start making friends. He stomped the tail of his skateboard to ollie it onto the sidewalk.

 
 
 

SO:

THE RULES

 

The giveaway is a drawing. To enter, you need to do the following:

    1. Comment on this post and indicate which of the ARCs you’d be interested in winning (please include at least two or three options, in case your first choice isn’t available). Your comment earns you one entry in the drawing.
    2. Make sure you comment using a valid email address so I can contact you if you win!

 

Ah, but there’s more! See, you can earn EXTRA entries if you do any of the following:

 

  • Subscribe to A Fuzzy Mango With Wings (*points to the top of the right-hand sidebar*) or follow on Google Reader, then mention it in your comment (I don’t have a way to verify the latter, so I’m trusting you guys to be honest). + 1 entry
  • If you’re on Twitter, tweet about the contest (please include a link to your tweet in the comments section—here’s how) + 1 entry
  • If you’re on Goodreads, add at least one of these books to your To-Read list (again, please include a link in the comments) + 2 entries
  • If you have a blog, blog about the contest (again, please include a link to your blog post in the comments) + 3 entries

 

The contest is open until 11:59 PM PST on July 16, 2012. THREE WINNERS will be selected randomly by Random.org and will get one of the ARCs they listed (hopefully there’s enough diversity of choice that it’ll all work out). I’ll announce the winners sometime next week! The contest is open to anyone in North America or possssssibly Europe (my bank account permitting—I’ll let you know).

WOO! Good luck, everyone!

YE SHALL HAVE ARCS! (or, The People Have Spoken)

8 Jul
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Dear Readers,

As Miss Mango is feeling stressed and is currently deep in work-mode, I have taken it upon myself to drop in and let you know that after a few days of polling, it seems that a BEA ARC giveaway is the clear favorite for upcoming blogiversary festivities. Rejoice! We shall return on Thursday with more information regarding which galleys we will be giving away and how said giveaway will proceed. But for now, feast your eyes upon the bounty of books and consider putting some thought into your blogiversary party attire. (One must dress nicely for such things, yes?)

In the meantime, I am off to make Miss Mango a hot drink. Poor thing.

Sincerely yours, as ever,

Frederick Regency Raptor

MY BLOGIVERSARY IS COMING (or, Tell Me What Presents I Should Give You)!

5 Jul

A YEAR. A whole year of blogging. Can you believe it, guys? I’m astonished—back when I started this thing on July 16th, 2011, I thought it was a fun foray in a new medium. I never expected it to go anywhere, though. I’ve always sucked at journaling; I must have 10 or 15 notebooks from my childhood that started out as attempts at diaries and ended up languishing in some drawer. Frankly, I had no reason to think this experiment would turn out any differently.

But holy crap. One year later and I’m still writing posts. Twice a week. More or less regularly. And even weirder/more unexpected: people are reading those posts. I’m continually so surprised and grateful that anyone would ever be remotely interested in reading my rambles. So thank YOU. Yes, you. The person reading this post. Because without you, it would be hard to convince myself that I haven’t spent the last year talking to myself. Combine that with the fact that I’m a writer and spend a lot of my free time talking to people who don’t exist, and…yeah. I’m glad you’re here! :) *hugs*

But oy, here I am getting all maudlin and sentimental, and this is supposed to be about planning a PARTY!

Because I’m feeling so warm and fuzzy, I want to give back to YOU GUYS on my blogiversary. :D So, I need to hear from you: what do you want? Some ideas I had (though I definitely want to hear your suggestions too *points emphatically to comments box*):

  • BEA advance reader copy (ARC) adoption (a.k.a. giveaway)! I would love to read all the books I’ve acquired since arriving in NYC this summer, but frankly, I’ll be lucky to find the time to read a fraction of them! And the point of an ARC is to generate publicity (via blogging or word-of-mouth) for the book before its release date. Frankly, I’m doing those writers a disservice if I just sit on all these books until I can read them, so I’m excited by the prospect of giving some away to good homes. (And guys, I have TONS of ARCs, in a variety of genres. Srsly. Check out my haul.)
  • Query letter critique! I’m an intern for a literary agency. I read A LOT of query letters. I’ve also been studying query-writing for years, and as a writer, I know how frustrating it is to try to condense 50-90K words down into a measly little one-page document. As such, I think I’m fairly well qualified to offer useful critique and tell you honestly (but kindly) how I would respond to your query if it showed up in our inbox.
  • Opening pages critique! Similarly, I read a lot of opening pages. Sometimes they’re the opening pages from requested manuscripts; sometimes they’re just pages included in the body of the email with a query.* As any agent or intern can attest, most of the time, we can tell within a couple of sentences/paragraphs whether the writing is any good, although I’ll generally read a bit further just to be sure. So if I do this critique, I’ll read the first ten pages of your manuscript, offer constructive criticism, and tell you (again, honestly but kindly) what aspect of it (if any) would make me stop reading.

Those are my blogiversary thoughts so far. I could do one. I could maybe even do a couple. Not sure yet how I’ll pick winners yet (a raffle/drawing? an actual competition/contest?), so let me know your thoughts. And if you have another idea for a celebratory blog event, tell me about it! (EDIT: I’ve even inserted a poll to facilitate your choice! Go! Click!)

For now, I’m off to keep on doing what I do: reading/writing/critiquing manuscripts. :) Happy Thursday, everyone!

Much love,

Ari and Fred

* PROTIP:  if an agent doesn’t ask for pages, you should still always include your first five pages (UNLESS the agent specifically says not to include any). Our agency doesn’t request pages, but if you include them and your query isn’t abysmal, I will read them, and we’ve requested manuscripts from people who had poor queries but whose opening pages were good. Of course, that is absolutely not an excuse to write a bad query! Polish it until it shines. Don’t leave us in any doubt that you’re a brilliant writer. But don’t waste an opportunity to hook us, so include those opening five pages. And if you’re concerned because your opening five pages aren’t the most intriguing/gripping part of the book…well MAKE them intriguing/gripping, gosh darn it! :P

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